Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Pb3a: Finding out what lions eat.

                Everyone likes cats, right? If not you probably like dogs. And if not them either, maybe some like ferret or something. The point is that all sane people like animals and enjoy some type of furry or scaly creature. I would like to make my Pb3a into a translation of the scholarly article about the diets of animals “Carbon isotopes ratios of bone apatite and animal diet reconstruction,” into a nice playful story book for children and an interesting recipe for some adult’s pets.
                 Kids grow up dreaming of playing with lions or dolphins or even elephants. Likewise many adults would love to have a pet lion too. I always just imagined me feeding my pet crocodile the leftover broccoli that I didn’t like under the table when my parents weren’t looking. Now that I’m older I think to myself, “What do crocodiles actually eat?” I’m 110% sure that many other kids have asked what certain animals eat, and many parents probably said the simple answer of meat or vegetables.  But with my interpretation of the scholarly article by Sullivan and Kruegar, I’d present their knowledge of animal diets into almost like an educational picture book. This would have like pop-outs and bright colors and short sentences that almost every single 4th grader wants to read in his free time. The whole purpose of this would to educate the children about actual animals or plants their favorite animals eat. This could be accomplished with sentences like “Carl the crocodile crunched on his crisp tiny crustaceans,” or, “Larry the lion loves licking his fresh lamb.” Anything that uses simple rhetorical elements such as metaphors or alliteration because they attract the attention of new readers.
                 For adults I’d have to take another approach to the animal diet. When people think of their animals they think of how cuddly and fun they are to play with, and for an animal to be active, they must be fed well. I was thinking of making like an article from Pet smart or something that gives recipes for great meals for their fluffy cat or beautiful dog. Something I might write would be like, “Add two cubes of salmon meat for your little precious cat because it boosts flavor while adding the extra nutrition they need!” It can even go further and talk about how the proteins increase muscle mass or even give a nice sheen to the cat’s fur. This would aim for the adult audience, pretty much no discrimination in age because all ages have furry little creatures that they want to take care of to the best of their ability. The whole point would show the connection between the animal’s natural diet and what you can feed them to give them the best quality of life they can get—which is what every pet owner really wants.



To create an effective piece for a certain audience, you have to pay attention to what they want to hear. Kids aren’t going to want to hear how the color and thickness of your animal’s poop might allude to a sickness that they have. Similarly adults already know that lions eat meat and giraffes eat leaves.  So I plan to make a story book about what animals eat for the children and an a recipe for pet food for adults.

4 comments:

  1. I like your idea of creating a children’s book about an animal's diet for the younger audience. When I was younger I always wondered what different animals ate and without a smartphone or easy access to a computer, my owner continued. This is a book topic I could definitely imagine seeing on the children’s shelf at the bookstore.
    I do think you must be careful how you approach some of the animal’s diets. Personally, I loved little lambs as a kid. I think they are very cute, soft, and cuddly. I used to go play with baby lambs on my friends farm. Imagining them being “licked” or eaten in general would make me really not like and be afraid of crocodiles. How can you approach this topic without scaring the innocence of the little children?
    A recipe for animal food is also a good idea. All my friends with cats and dogs really love them. I can imagine them all wanting to make fresh, healthy food for their furry friends. Your use of adjectives is really helpful to lure in the readers.

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  2. You picked such a cool topic to focus on. In your genre translation geared toward children, I think that the way you plan on using alliteration and parallel structure will be very fitting of the children’s book genre. What do you plan on doing for pictures? Photos? Drawings? For your genre translation geared toward adults, what is the genre? Articles on recipes? Articles on pets? Articles from PetSmart? I see that you really thought through your audience for this, so make sure you really make the genre clear so that no one is confused when reading your awesome translation. I think the two genres that you chose will play off of each other really well because you include both the emotional and technical parts of animals and their diets. Will you be including images in your recipe/diet article? Will humor be involved? I think you’re really on track with both of these ideas. Just think about format and layout!

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  3. So first off, your topic is very cool, mostly because I wondered if anyone would a science oriented topic because it seemed hard to make a science-oriented topic a fun read for kids, but you really nailed it so props. I think everyone should know what animals eat, like it should be common knowledge, so that's why I liked how you picked a children's book for it, also the pop-up book idea is a nice and creative touch. As for the older audience, I feel like you are making a very wise choice there. It makes sense, if someone is reading a pet recipe it is clear to see that the they have a genuine concern for what their pets should eat, it's a brilliant idea. It seems like you are very interested in your topic as well. I think that is a very good sign that you have so much interest in your topic, it will make it a lot easier on you too. You're ideas correlate very nicely and simply for such a complex topic. Good job and good luck.

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  4. Dr. Bruning,

    You’re turning these “ into a nice playful story book for children and an interesting recipe for some adult’s pets”? Hell yeah! The scholarly piece sounds tailor-made for educational transformations, and the conventions that you pinpointed for the children’s book, such as this consonance/alliteration—“Carl the crocodile crunched on his crisp tiny crustaceans,” or, “Larry the lion loves licking his fresh lamb” is spot-on.

    It’s tough for me to gauge this without reading journal article, but what was the essence/spirit of the piece? Was it the some diet that enhances animals’ health? Well, how did they find that out (or whatever they found)? Are any of their research decisions worth bringing out? Remember: these are other aspects from the scholarly source that you can pull out besides just “getting old can suck.” How was the study conducted? What data did they collect, and why? What did previous researchers find? These are all possible angles for your transformation if you think they’re (1) important and (2) relevant in some way for the genre you’re transforming them into.

    Z

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