When you
hear that something is scholarly you tend to assume that it’s researched and
most of the time correct. I also tend to assume that whatever they are talking
about is way out of my field of comprehension. Scholarly articles tend to be
peer reviewed and made sure to be perfected long before they are ever published
to make sure that they represent the correct traditions and customs of their
respective discipline. You won’t find a “scholarly” article that pokes fun at
Trump’s wig. They are always on topic and constructed with the utmost formalities.
In the
scigen generator you can find samples of so called scholarly papers. They used
common phrases that appear quite frequently in other published scientific
papers such as, “Many mathematicians would agree that,” or “Suppose that there
exists cache coherence.” And people are sometimes fooled by this. The crazy
thing about this generator is that publishers in real life have actually been
fooled by this and have published “papers” even though the scientific paper
they received was nothing but jargon they obviously didn’t understand. A
scientific research paper is obviously a genre, and the makers of this website
just used multiple conventions of the genre and meshed them together into what
appears to be a research paper. They put
enough fluff into the papers where people will just skim through it and accept
it as fact, because they honestly have no idea what the ‘article’ is talking
about. This is really important to note because the fact that it can be passed
as a scholarly article shows that it has enough of the same conventions as the
actual article that it passes for the real one.
In the article “VISUAL DISORIENTATION WITH
SPECIAL REFERENCE TO LESIONS OF THE RIGHT CEREBRAL HEMISPHERE.” The author is
talking about something that he obviously knows a lot about. Or maybe he is spitting
out random phrases like scigen. The point is that the actual article published
by Oxford University and the text junk spewed out by the Article generator are indistinguishable
for me as a reader. They use so much jargon that is inconceivable for me to
even attempt to understand the title of the article, let alone what the body is
trying to tell me. The only difference between the two publications that I can
see is the layout. SciGen is laid out like a lab project while Oxford’s looks
more like the page of a lengthy boring article. However they both do include
pictures that show you want they are trying to tell you—so the use of visual
images helps convey the message to the reader.
The
absolutely most important piece of any scholarly article is the title. The
title is the first thing you look at. When you are late night researching up
topics to write about in the morning before your paper is due—like I am
currently—you look for articles with titles that contain the key words you’re
looking for. Thankfully Google quickens this process for us. You’re not going
to pick an article titled “Young minds use interpersonal manipulation between
allies to influence potential mates” for your research article about economic
theory. The point I’m getting at is that with a scholarly article the title has
to present itself to the world and basically tell it who its audience is meant
to be.
Scholarly
articles are the bane of anyone who isn’t interested in the topic. Oxford’s
article gives most people shivers when they find out that it is the reading
assignment. However so does a nonsense article form scigen. They both have
similar conventions such as pictures and jargons; however they have contrasts
such as structure and actual reality of the articles.
The opening paragraph is awesome. I love how it sets an informative tone as you begin to speak about scholarly articles, yet lighten the mood by letting us know that some of the topics are over your head (just like most readers) and you even mention Trump's wig. I really liked the way you expanded on how using conventions of specific genres can help fool the readers of the SCIgen into actually publishing the papers, which is something I didn't know. I found your take on the title and its importance very interesting, because half the time I don't even know what the title is trying say. Overall, your take on the two articles was very cool and the PB was a nice read. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you grab attention using the title. Boldly stately that these articles which the intellectual community believes as credible may not be helpful is a very good way to catch a reader’s attention. I like that intro is short and sweet and straight to the point which makes this easier to read. I like the set up of this essay as well. All the paragraphs are relatively medium in length so they give a good amount of information but aren’t long enough to bore the reader to sleep. However, while I see you do some minor comparing and contrasting it isn’t significant like it was just an after-thought. Finally, while the title is an very important aspect you don’t fully explain why it is so important other than it is very convenient. Over all, good job though.
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